We build websites for the local small business that depends on consistent local leads and a fantastic reputation online. 

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That sounds a bit confusing, quite honestly. Something like "I create lead generation websites for small business" is more to the point.

I think it would smooth everything out if you used "who" instead of "that":  We build websites for local small businesses who depend on consistent local leads and a fantastic reputation online.

We create consistent local leads and a fantastic online reputation.

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