I believe I found your website, www.drdorothy.net. Is that correct? I think the home page should be more headlines and bullet points about what you do as people won’t read paragraphs of information just to find out what it is that you do. It is a very short page as well. Are you doing the website yourself? The home page should be a short summary of the entire website. I save what you have for a page like “Why Choose Dr. Dorothy” and have information and pictures on the home page about the benefits your services provide, not the process or the cause of the issues.