What Do You Think of Our Site? [website feedback requested]
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It's clean but it's all about you. Where is the customer in this story -- what problem are you solving for them. Start with a clear message about what this site is instead of a bullet point about your business -- Show me a problem (which opens a story loop) Show me images of people getting that problem solved and then show me what their lives look like AFTER they've worked with you. Too much focus on YOU, nothing on THEM and here's a bit of honesty for you -- People want to be the HERO of their stories and nobody cares about you or your business UNLESS you position yourself as a GUIDE helping the hero of the story win. Your site is clean and pretty, but the words are wrong.