Can you give me feedback on my webpage?

Joanna, here is my suggestion. Spend a little time on your hero image. This needs to be a high quality image that conveys professionalism. Research suggests that you have about a half a second before someone has made a decision about the integrity/quality of your business offerings. That hero image is the first thing they see.

The content at the top of the page is your "elevator pitch." Clarity is power. Be succinct, and provide your membership benefits. How will the children benefit from the parent becoming a member of your group.

Just my quick thoughts.
I had no trouble going right to the page. Accessed it on my laptop.

Hey Joanna: I am not that familiar with the Patreon platform, other than it's a way for peeps to earn coin from other peeps. So I am perhaps not the best person for feedback. One has to put in your exact address, cause Patreon overrides the link and reverts to their home page. I tried finding your page through their search bar, but I went in 10 pages and couldn't locate it. Had it enter your title manually to get to your page. However, I did look at your page in Chrome and Epic (which is a privacy browser, which is sometimes more finicky as a result.) It looked the same in both, which is good news. I would suggest revising your header to make it less pixel-ated? The Dare to Dream headline? Other than that, go get'em tigress and good luck!

Your page doesn’t load correctly from the link you supplied. Once I got to your page, while it’s colorful, I found the content very confusing. Tiers and Rewards is all I remember after looking at the site twice. I had to go back a third time to figure out your message and what you’re selling. Even the header is confusing. I spent several minutes trying to decipher the page title and the partially hidden message in pink letters. You want to clearly tell visitors what your site is about, who you are, and what you’re offering.

Hi, Joanna. I'm using a laptop with Firefox as the browser. When I first clicked on the link I was brought to Patreon's landing page. The second time I got to your website. Not sure why that happened.

I like your site but in the header, the letters (pink) in the title don't look crisp / clear. They look the tiniest blurry.

Hope this helps,

Karen

I love the concept of the whole site. Has movement, easy to get around, cool idea. Some profiles loaded just a bit slow but I am not sure if that was because of my own internet or not. But as some others noted the first click took me to the main website home page. I did have to click your link again to get to your profile. Your profile loaded fine, and faster than others after having clicked around. I am not sure if you could use a vector image so it will load fully without being pixelated and could be redone to better represent your reading club. Your YouTube video could use a better title so it will have more targeted SEO value along with a bit longer description and keywords.

I am not a sugar coater. I like the concept a lot, but I think your video takes too long to get to the point and many people will tune out before they really understand it . The video has a lot of mistakes and pauses. It does not have to be slick and perfect, but it needs to be done so it is at least not so rushed and unorganized..

So I have two kids myself, and I am left a bit confused of what you are offering. You talk a lot about what you will do, but no real example scenario to understand it better. It's a lot of teasers but no real taste. Give a free small complete story to make them salivate for more. Also too much info on the site. I would have just one complete short story, and an intro teaser video no more than 1 minute. Just my thoughts after spending about 5 mins on your site.

I'm in Google Chrome on a desktop and when I clicked the link you posted, it took me to Patreon.com. But when I edited the link in my browser window and added "DareToDream" it went to your website. It could be that when you put the link in the <a href=""> you need to include the http:// I've run into that when I was at a corporate office and it had to do with domain names and the A record.

I would lead with the text you have on your page that starts with "Dare to Dream is a project..." People read from left to right, top to down and if they immediately don't see what this page is about, they bounce. I hope this helps! :)

My questions to you are: When I visited your site, where did you want me to go..? What links did you want me to click..?

My critique: Heuristically, your site is a complete mess!

My solution: Let's fix this!

ok where we go for some reason the first time I click the link it send me just to the patreon homepage the the second time I try redirect me to your profile page but I think that it may be something on patreon but I recommend to contact them just in case there's a problem with the redirection of the link.

now about your page it look good I personally like it and like and find very interesting the only to things I found was the banner is blurry and it is recommended to be a sharp image know that can be because maybe you use a small image or may be is just the image is low resolution and it is recommended a hi-resolution image. the the other was noise in the audio and this is very important and mostly for the kind of work and content you do, I personally found the noise distracting it kind of difficult to concentrate in hearing you. I recommend a more silence place indoor it is possible or it can be the just the mic. now if you like to narrate in outdoors you can try a noise cancellation mic or a filter than can help to. there's also software that can do this job but it will be easier to get someone to do it for you. if is my case I try a new mic if it is possible a noise cancellation one, the filter and a less noisy place that will help you a lot. I hope this can help you. any other question just let me know. I forgot to mention I visited from my laptop and I believe and Im sure that Patreon is responcive as well.

Looks Responsive.