Can you give me feedback on my webpage?
Thank you all for your feedback. I am currently working on all issues.
I need your honest feedback once again. Are you willing to take a look?
I launched Dare to Dream Storytelling Club and I am looking for feedback. I'm needing to know what device you used to access my page and if it loaded okay. I am looking for any support you can give me on
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I used Firefox on a pc, and I did not see your page. It was just the home page for Patreon.
the link doesn’t take you to your page but patreon.com log in page.
Browser: Safari and Chrome
Device: iPhoneX
The header image with "Dare to Dream Join Today" is not clear. A larger image size in the same preportion saved at 72dpi will work much better. An accordian or buttons for your membership tiers would work to keep the scrolling down in better check. People tend to not want to scroll down that far on a site. Good Luck, Krina
I looked on iPhone 6s and it seems to load fine
What is the business?
ok I will take s loo
I used iphone 7 amd loaded fine. Congrats on your site looks nice!
Your site looks fine. Your sitemap, however is a bit of a train wreck: https://www.patreon.com/sitemap :)
Hi Joanna. The link above did not take me to your page but I searched and found you here: https://www.patreon.com/DaretoDream - I think the problem with the link you posted might be the missing s after http at the beginning. I’ll provode more once I’ve had a chance to review further.
Very nice site, well laid out and you kept it simple with not too many pages which can tend to cloud the message you are sending. Visually appealing. You have an interesting concept and I wish you luck. I think you will do well. Best Regards, Charles - PS: I used Chrome to check it out.